Chapter 1: Men Carry Wounds Too

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Of course. Let’s use Chapter 1 as the style and pacing benchmark for the entire novel: scenes should unfold naturally, never feel rushed, emotions should emerge through events, and each chapter ending should give readers a reason to open the next one. For Chapter 2, we’ll shift the point of view from Luna to Lana. Since Chapter 1 ends in the morning as Luna leaves for work, Chapter 2 will introduce Lana’s life from morning until night. They won’t meet yet. Readers must first understand that somewhere else, there is someone carrying his own exhaustion. --- 🌧️ THE WOUNDS THAT MAKE US CHAPTER 2

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